Please help me with English?
Hello:D
Can you please correct my grammar or vocabulary mistakes and make it better ?lol
Thank you 
As I read chapters six, nine, and selected topics from the lectures, I learned many essential terms and methods relating to art such as ,silkscreen printing, monotype, lost wax methods, casting and many more. At the same time, I became really interested to find out about different methods and techniques the artists use in their printmaking and sculptures and how they impact the way viewers think and feel.
I think it’s very well written, and would only make a couple of suggestions:
-remove the comma before ’silkscreen printing’
-perhaps change the section ‘At the same time, I became really interested to find out about different…’ to ‘At the same time, I became very interested in finding out about the different…"
-insert comma after ’sculptures’
March 2nd, 2010 at 6:02 am
As I read chapters six through nine and the selected topics from the lectures, I learned many essential terms and methods relating to art; such as ,silkscreen printing, mono type, lost wax methods, casting and many more. At the same time, I became really interested finding information on different methods and techniques the artists use in their printmaking and sculptures and how they impact the way viewers think and feel.
i tired
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March 2nd, 2010 at 6:40 am
I think it’s very well written, and would only make a couple of suggestions:
-remove the comma before ’silkscreen printing’
-perhaps change the section ‘At the same time, I became really interested to find out about different…’ to ‘At the same time, I became very interested in finding out about the different…"
-insert comma after ’sculptures’
References :
Just my opinion
March 2nd, 2010 at 7:03 am
As I read through chapter six, nine, and selected topics from the lecture notes, I acquired knowledge on essential terms and methods relating to arts, such as, silkscreen printing, monotype, lost wax methods, casting, etc.
It boosts my interests in finding out more about different methods and techniques that artists use, in print making, sculptures and also how they impact the way viewers think and feel.
References :